A Hate Story First - Previous - Archive - Map - Cast - Stories - FAQ - Links - Home

The Commander speaks: 29. January 2012 a.d. While the look on Zindy's face is a completely neutral one, with no pixels making it give away anything speacial, you can still sort of feel the confusion she must have from overhearing all this. No frown. No lifting one eye higher than the other. No glasses to make her look slightly mysterious. Just a straight face looking forward. Zindy must have thought really hard about that invisibility spell she is using. if the Raider can't see you despite all the abilities at his command, then you've definetely done something extraordinary. The main problem with having the Raider as the protagonist is that he is basicly the most powerful and most dangerous thing alive. And he is immune to kryptonite. And he could probably dodge bullets. Not that it matters, because those two things doesn't exist in this world. Signing off.